I liked how you went for a very simple layout. It could for been a bit longer but it was very entertaining. My favorite part was the part about the girls clothes and how he had to hide from the bully.Over all it was a nice and simple story that was very entertaining.
Well done phoebe, I liked how you kept it simple but I would recommend making it a bit longer. It was funny when he had to go naked or go in girls togs because he forgot his togs. I think next time you should add more choices like maybe if he is late for school or he can't remember how to swim or maybe his togs have a hole in them. I think this story would be suitable for any ages as it is quite funny.
Good job Phoebe and Kate. It was a very funny story but also I think maybe next time add a few more slides. I liked how it was simple and it would be a good story for all ages.
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I liked how you went for a very simple layout. It could for been a bit longer but it was very entertaining. My favorite part was the part about the girls clothes and how he had to hide from the bully.Over all it was a nice and simple story that was very entertaining.
ReplyDeleteWell done phoebe, I liked how you kept it simple but I would recommend making it a bit longer. It was funny when he had to go naked or go in girls togs because he forgot his togs. I think next time you should add more choices like maybe if he is late for school or he can't remember how to swim or maybe his togs have a hole in them. I think this story would be suitable for any ages as it is quite funny.
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ReplyDeleteGood job Phoebe and Kate. It was a very funny story but also I think maybe next time add a few more slides. I liked how it was simple and it would be a good story for all ages.
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